Poetry Extempore

Thursday, November 13, 2014

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November 13, 2014

Today I asked my Writing class to make a poem about love. They only had 30 minutes to do this, but some really impressed me.

Here are excerpts from their poems:

"Holding on and letting go is a part of love
You hold on because you believe you can make something better"
- Maica

"Love is a feeling towards the other
To a neighbor, relatives, especially with your mother"
- Joshua

"I think that I'm the only one in this world
No problem and aches
Just happiness and gladness"
- Jerlene

"Love is like a gift
That everyone's dream (sic) of
Even though sometimes it's hard to find
We are still wishing for it"
- Claire

"My life is full of happiness
When I'm with you and you're with me"
- Hillary

"It will break your heart
Cracked into pieces like peanuts"
- Marriz

"Love is amazing
It is my everything
Without it, I can't do nothing"
- Rosselle

"Love is sweeter the second time around
But not all the time"
- Mica

"Love creates wrongs but you have to be strong"
- Gelica

"Loving someone is the best feeling that you feel
It makes you happy and will be your inspiration"
- Nolier

"Holding on and letting go is a part of love
You hold on because you believe you can make something better..."
- Maica

"Sometimes love is bad
Because love hurts you
But love happens in God's time"
- Lyka


I'm raising a bunch of poets, am I not? :)



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